I walk into a haunted the door creeks and suddenly shuts behind me i walk further in and as the flame flickered then went out I realise I am here alone and I can't get out, I see something cross my path so I stop turn, around and there is a person standing behind me with a knife. I run as fast as I possibly can, I turn around while i'm running and realise it was a statue, as I keep running I look forward again and run into a wall, I got knocked out when I woke up I realised it was all a dream.
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I was having the time of my life
Campfires with my family, the perfect night watching the stars And then all of a sudden everything went black, I was sleeping I woke up from the cold and noticed the fire was almost out I quickly try to get some wood to burn but instead of make it burn I made that last flame go out I got the match and build up the fire one flame at a time, finally I lay down enjoying the warmth and promising myself to stay awake and keep it going but before I knew I was sound asleep again As the flame flickered and then it went out.
“We’re all out of firewood.” My father said. “What do we do now?” I asked. Nobody answered, a few seconds later everyone in the campground’s lights went out. It was like the campground was haunted. I was looking around and saw my sister was missing from her site. There were stains of blood on her site. I was going to tell my parents that Sally was missing but I saw there was their on her mouth. Then I knew they weren't my parents. They were cannibals and I was next. There I was, waiting for my slow, painful death. This was it, my final breath. Than I could hear her screaming. “ No! You don't have to do this! I know You care about me , But this was all my fault! I should be the one being punished.”
I couldn't let her put the blame on herself for every stupid, immature thing we have gotten bashed for, I thought to myself. “Maria. This one's on me…” I prayed that I would have a good life up there and that she will always remember me, as the flame flickered and then went out…. I walked into my house after a cold night out knowing that I would be the only one home. The first and only thing I see is a singular candle that looks like it is floating in mid air. Struggling to find a light switch, out of the corner of my eye I see the flame flicker and then go out. I scream at the top of my lungs so the whole world can hear. Then I hear footsteps which sounded like they were coming right for me. I scramble to find the light switch against the wall. Then I find it turn it on and realize it was my dog.
I feel the dirt and rocks digging into my back as I lay on the ground in the middle of the woods. Opening my eyes and looking up I can see the black sky. I hear thunder. I pick a direction and start walking.
About half an hour later I find a small tiny one roomed shed like house. Looking through the one window I see a small lit candle. As I walk in the small nasty smelling room the door slams behind me and the flame flickered and went out. I turn around just in time for me to see the beast that killed me. As I was walking down a back alley I saw this faint flickering. So I went and checked it out and as I did it turned out to be a fire,. Being a hobo I took advantage of it and took a bag of trash and used it as a seat. I noticed that the fire didn’t give heat so I put my hand close and whooooom I went into the fire and when I did I smelled this awful stench like rotting flesh. All of a sudden there was this low growl I turned around and BAM.
I saw a glowing light in the distance.
As I walked closer it was much bigger than I thought. I now was right up to it and saw it was a huge fire just flickering. For some strange reason I walked into it and felt nothing. I woke up and saw a red flat planet. It was so bare I could just walk for an eternity. I couldn’t believe I was here but what I did here Is a another story. Then I heard a faint tick sound. I woke up. I cried in pure mental pain as the flame flickered then went out. Now I knew I would certainly freeze to death. I watched as the embers slowly lost their orange glow. The night was pitch black without a flame keeping a glow over my shoulder. I saw orange illuminate the remains of the airplane. It was the third night and no sign of a boat, plane, or helicopter. The smell of burning fuel touched the air. I felt sleepy and I knew that I would soon fall asleep. I tried to stay awake for safety, but soon the sleep took me and I was out.
Ok so, im going to get STRAIGHT to the point...THERE CAN’T BE A FLAME JUST APEARING OUT OF NOWHERE! The flame might have started SOMEHOW by your moms, dads,brothers,sons,dogs,cats,owners,grandmothers,grandchild's,dad. OR it might have been started by your sisters,cats,rats,cheese, that have started it but, who knows because everyone knows that a flame cant just apear then disintegrate. But, I know what started it…...it was your moms,dads,sons,sisters,dogs,owners,PICKLE! HAHAHAHA, GOTCHA!! It wasn't a pickle, did you actually BELIEVE ME, haw, im never telling you. (never in a life time)
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